Theme: Beach
Line Rule:6 words containing "to"
My entry: To stare at futility across water, Tokyo-3.
Play the game. (This is a round-robin sort of creative poetry thing that I'm fascinated with. I found it on SocialSpark, and it's rather fun to see the results. It's also great for kicking your muse into action when you're blanking, because you have a specific thing to state, and limited words. In case it isn't obvious, I had Shinji on the brain during this, since it shows his state of mind during any one of the scenes he is staring at the water, excluding the happy one with Kaworu.)
Want to play again? The new theme is NIGHT and the line rule is A FIVE WORD INCLUDING 2 ADJECTIVES. Submissions end on August 14, 2008 and the poem will be published on August 15, 2008